From: Anurag Dwivedi Date: Mon, 17 Apr 2017 07:00:26 +0000 (-0400) Subject: RIFT-14692 : Feedback on nsd.yang comments X-Git-Url: https://osm.etsi.org/gitweb/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=refs%2Fchanges%2F72%2F1572%2F1;p=osm%2FSO.git RIFT-14692 : Feedback on nsd.yang comments Signed-off-by: Anurag Dwivedi --- diff --git a/models/plugins/yang/mano-types.yang b/models/plugins/yang/mano-types.yang index ab234be4..4ec602cb 100644 --- a/models/plugins/yang/mano-types.yang +++ b/models/plugins/yang/mano-types.yang @@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ module mano-types leaf protocol { description - "Protocol to use for NETCONF such as ssh"; + "Protocol to use for NETCONF, such as ssh"; type enumeration { enum None; enum ssh; @@ -313,7 +313,7 @@ module mano-types leaf config-priority { description "Configuration priority - order of configuration - to be applied to each VNF in this NS ,A low + to be applied to each VNF in this NS. A low number takes precedence over a high number"; type uint64; } @@ -1252,14 +1252,17 @@ module mano-types key id; leaf id { + description "Identifier for control parameter"; type string; } leaf name { + description "Name of a control parameter"; type string; } leaf description { + description "A description of the control parameter"; type string; } diff --git a/models/plugins/yang/nsd.yang b/models/plugins/yang/nsd.yang index 15cd2e37..78183919 100644 --- a/models/plugins/yang/nsd.yang +++ b/models/plugins/yang/nsd.yang @@ -148,8 +148,8 @@ module nsd leaf logo { description - "File path for the vendor specific logo. For example icons/mylogo.png. - The logo should be part of the network service"; + "File path for the vendor-specific logo. For example, icons/mylogo.png. + The logo should be part of the network service"; type string; } @@ -166,16 +166,11 @@ module nsd list connection-point { description "List for external connection points. - Each NS has one or more external connection - points. As the name implies that external - connection points are used for connecting - the NS to other NS or to external networks. - Each NS exposes these connection points to - the orchestrator. The orchestrator can - construct network service chains by - connecting the connection points between - different NS."; - + Each network service (NS) has one or more external connection + points that connect the NS to other NSs or to external networks. + Each NS exposes connection points to the orchestrator, which can + construct network service chains by connecting the connection + points between different NSs."; key "name"; leaf name { description @@ -190,12 +185,12 @@ module nsd } } - /* Still having issues modelling this, + /* Model Limitations, see the comments under vnfd-connection-point-ref */ list vld { description - "List of Virtual Link Descriptors."; + "List of Virtual Link Descriptors (VLDs)."; key "id"; @@ -262,7 +257,7 @@ module nsd leaf vnfd-id-ref { description - "A reference to a vnfd"; + "A reference to a VNFD"; type leafref { path "../../../constituent-vnfd" + "[member-vnf-index = current()/../member-vnf-index-ref]" + @@ -321,8 +316,8 @@ module nsd leaf member-vnf-index { description "Identifier/index for the VNFD. This separate id - is required to ensure that multiple VNFs can be - part of single NS"; + is required so that multiple VNFs can be part of + single NS"; type uint64; } @@ -344,7 +339,7 @@ module nsd list scaling-group-descriptor { description - "scaling group descriptor within this network service. + "Scaling group descriptor within this network service. The scaling group defines a group of VNFs, and the ratio of VNFs in the network service that is used as target for scaling action"; @@ -392,7 +387,7 @@ module nsd description "Operation to be applied to check between scaling criterias to check if the scale out threshold condition has been met. - Defauls to OR"; + Defaults to OR"; type scaling-criteria-operation; default OR; } @@ -407,7 +402,7 @@ module nsd leaf cooldown-time { description "The duration after a scaling-in/scaling-out action has been - triggered, for which there will be no further optional"; + triggered, for which there will be no further scaling activity"; type uint32; mandatory true; } @@ -419,18 +414,21 @@ module nsd key "name"; leaf name { + description "Name of the scaling criteria"; type string; } leaf scale-in-threshold { description - "Value below which scale-in requests are generated"; + "Value below which scale-in requests are generated + (depends on monitoring parameters)"; type uint64; } leaf scale-out-threshold { description - "Value above which scale-out requests are generated"; + "Value above which scale-out requests are generated + (depends on monitoring parameters)"; type uint64; } @@ -450,7 +448,7 @@ module nsd key "member-vnf-index-ref"; leaf member-vnf-index-ref { - description "member VNF index of this member VNF"; + description "Member VNF index of this member VNF"; type leafref { path "../../../constituent-vnfd/member-vnf-index"; } @@ -458,9 +456,9 @@ module nsd leaf count { description - "count of this member VNF within this scaling group. - The count allows to define the number of instances - when a scaling action targets this scaling group"; + "Count of this member VNF within this scaling group. + The count defines the number of instances when a + scaling action targets this scaling group."; type uint32; default 1; } @@ -468,19 +466,20 @@ module nsd leaf min-instance-count { description - "Minimum instances of the scaling group which are allowed. - These instances are created by default when the network service - is instantiated."; + "Minimum number of instances of the scaling group that + are allowed in a single network service. These instances + are created by default when the network service is + instantiated."; type uint32; default 0; } leaf max-instance-count { description - "Maximum instances of this scaling group that are allowed - in a single network service. The network service scaling - will fail, when the number of service group instances - exceed the max-instance-count specified."; + "Maximum number of instances of this scaling group that + are allowed in a single network service. The network + service scaling fails when the number of service group + instances exceeds the max-instance-count specified."; type uint32; default 10; } @@ -490,7 +489,7 @@ module nsd key "trigger"; leaf trigger { - description "scaling trigger"; + description "Scaling trigger"; type scaling-trigger; } @@ -516,7 +515,7 @@ module nsd key "member-vnf-index-ref"; leaf member-vnf-index-ref { - description "member VNF index of this member VNF"; + description "Member VNF index of this member VNF"; type leafref { path "../../../constituent-vnfd/member-vnf-index"; } @@ -547,7 +546,7 @@ module nsd } leaf vnf-depends-on-ref { description - "Reference to VNF that sorce VNF depends."; + "Reference to VNF on which the source VNF depends."; type leafref { path "../../constituent-vnfd/vnfd-id-ref"; } @@ -686,7 +685,7 @@ module nsd leaf vnfd-id-ref { description - "A reference to a vnfd"; + "A reference to a VNFD"; type leafref { path "../../../constituent-vnfd" + "[member-vnf-index = current()/../member-vnf-index-ref]" + @@ -718,7 +717,7 @@ module nsd leaf ip-proto { description - "IP Protocol."; + "Internet Protocol."; type uint8; } @@ -745,22 +744,23 @@ module nsd "Destination port number."; type inet:port-number; } - //TODO: Add more match criteria } //match-attributes } // classifier } // vnffgd list monitoring-param { description - "List of monitoring parameters from VNF's that should be + "List of monitoring parameters from VNFs that should be propogated up into NSR"; key "id"; leaf id { + description "Identifier for a monitoring parameter"; type string; } leaf name { + description "Name of the monitoring parameter"; type string; } @@ -774,7 +774,7 @@ module nsd leaf vnfd-id-ref { description - "A reference to a vnfd. This is a leafref"; + "A reference to a VNFD. This is a leafref"; type leafref { path "../../../constituent-vnfd" + @@ -806,8 +806,8 @@ module nsd list parameter-pool { description - "Pool of parameter values which must be - pulled from during configuration"; + "Pool of parameter values from which to choose during + configuration."; key "name"; leaf name { @@ -818,7 +818,7 @@ module nsd container range { description - "Create a range of values to populate the pool with"; + "Create a range of values from which to populate the pool with"; leaf start-value { description @@ -873,7 +873,7 @@ module nsd leaf vnfd-id-ref { description - "A reference to a vnfd. This is a leafref"; + "A reference to a VNFD. This is a leafref"; type leafref { path "../../../constituent-vnfd" + @@ -925,7 +925,7 @@ module nsd list key-pair { key "name"; description "Used to configure the list of public keys to be injected as part - of ns instantiation"; + of NS instantiation"; leaf name { description "Name of this key pair"; @@ -955,7 +955,7 @@ module nsd list key-pair { key "name"; description "Used to configure the list of public keys to be injected as part - of ns instantiation"; + of NS instantiation"; leaf name { description "Name of this key pair"; diff --git a/models/plugins/yang/nsr.yang b/models/plugins/yang/nsr.yang index b081f6a9..3fdd6428 100644 --- a/models/plugins/yang/nsr.yang +++ b/models/plugins/yang/nsr.yang @@ -271,11 +271,7 @@ module nsr ../../../../nsd:constituent-vnfd + [nsr:id = current()/../nsd:id-ref] + /nsd:vnfd-id-ref - NOTE: An issue with confd is preventing the - use of xpath. Seems to be an issue with leafref - to leafref, whose target is in a different module. - Once that is resolved this will switched to use - leafref"; + NOTE: confd limitations prevent the use of xpath"; type yang:uuid; } @@ -869,11 +865,7 @@ module nsr ../../../../nsd:constituent-vnfd + [nsd:id = current()/../nsd:id-ref] + /nsd:vnfd-id-ref - NOTE: An issue with confd is preventing the - use of xpath. Seems to be an issue with leafref - to leafref, whose target is in a different module. - Once that is resolved this will switched to use - leafref"; + NOTE: confd limitations prevent the use of xpath"; type string; } @@ -931,12 +923,17 @@ module nsr } list parameter { + description + "List of parameters for the initial config primitive"; key "name"; leaf name { + description "Name of the intitial config parameter"; type string; } leaf value { + description "Value associated with the initial config + parameter"; type string; } } @@ -1178,11 +1175,7 @@ module nsr ../../../../nsd:constituent-vnfd + [nsd:id = current()/../nsd:id-ref] + /nsd:vnfd-id-ref - NOTE: An issue with confd is preventing the - use of xpath. Seems to be an issue with leafref - to leafref, whose target is in a different module. - Once that is resolved this will switched to use - leafref"; + NOTE: confd limitations prevent the use of xpath"; type string; }